If I was a superkid I would save people who are drowning and falling and stuck from a humongous, giant tsunami because it is a terrible danger. If you have one of these terrible dangers I will save you. I will look around the whole entire world because I will save you when a robber tries to steal your money because it is not fair when people sneak in to your house and steal your stuff. I will help you when you’re stuck under heavy stuff because I’m strong and I could lift up everything in the whole entire world. I can do x-ray vision. Do you know what that means? I can look through stuff because I am a super kid. I like being a superkid because it is fun because I like saving the world.
By Aquaysia
Aquaysia your superkid writing is EXTENDED ABSTRACT because you told us many things you would do if you were a superkid, explained why and reflected on what it would be like. You are a super-writer :)
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ReplyDeleteyour story is cool because you said you lift stuff off people
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